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Lisa’s silence answered before her words did.
“They can reinforce the platform. They can change the dressing, repaint it, rewire the lights, and make sure it’s safe. The mechanical system is outside what most of them do.”
Which was exactly what the photographs had failed to show me.
For weeks, I had been building an experience around the idea of a factory production line, linking rooms through movement, sound, performers, and progressive stages so guests felt as though they were traveling through one disturbing process instead of a collection of unrelated scares. The plan worked on paper because the updates I had received made the specialty effects look functional enough to carry the bigger moments.
They were not.
By the time Lisa and I reached the center of the attraction, I had counted three failing mechanisms and two newer effects that technically worked but had all the menace of a department-store Halloween display.
I stopped in a corridor lined with half-painted pipes.
The crew could finish the walls. They could age the metal, hang lights, build crates, dirty costumes, reposition performers, and improve the guest path. What they could not do by tomorrow night was turn weak mechanical work into convincing hero effects.
Trying to save every planned moment would leave us with twenty mediocre ones.
I pulled my notebook from my bag.
Lisa eventually noticed I had stopped following her. “You’ve gone very quiet. I’m hoping that means you’ve thought of something and not that you’re calculating how fast you can drive back to Chicago.”
“I’m not leaving.” I looked through the open doorway at the foam limbs, then at the examination table beyond them. “I’ve been asking the building to support too many individual scares. The broader production-line concept is still right, but we don’t need every room competing to be memorable. We need the guests to understand what this factory actually produces.”
I turned my notebook toward me and wrote one word across the top of a clean page.
People.
“The Factory manufactures people. We reduce everything to four major departments and make the smaller corridors support them. Raw Materials and Rendering uses the vats, ovens, bones, and loose parts we already have. Research and Quality Testing gets the examination tables, electrical equipment, specimens, and one genuinely strong effect instead of five mediocre ones. Human Assembly becomes the centerpiece, with the heads, limbs, torsos, and whatever section of the production line we can make move convincingly. Then Packaging and Shipping finishes it with wrapped bodies, tags, crates, hammering, and something inside one of those crates trying very hard not to be shipped.”
Lisa studied the rooms around us again before looking down at my page. “That’s disgusting, which I mean as a compliment. More importantly, my crew can actually build it.”
“Exactly. We stop asking them to do work they aren’t equipped for and let them concentrate on what they’re good at. We only need a few mechanical effects to be excellent if everything around them supports the same story.”
Some of the tension finally left Lisa’s face. “All right. Let’s change everyone’s afternoon.”
Her radio chirped again, but she ignored it for a moment as she looked toward the next room.
“There are a few older pieces you should see before you decide how much of the mechanical work to abandon.”
She led me deeper into the building.
The difference was obvious before she told me why.
One creature crouched above a doorway with long distorted fingers curled around the frame. Its movement was currently disabled, but the sculpting held up even under fluorescent work lights. Fine creases pulled around its mouth. The skin texture changed subtly across the forehead and cheeks. Even the hands had tendons and irregular nails instead of the smooth generic claws I had seen on several newer props.
In another room, an articulated head turned on a track when a crew member temporarily powered it. The motor made an unpleasant grinding noise, but the motion itself was elegant. The face followed us with just enough delay to feel wrong.
I stepped around it, studying the build.
“Who made these?”
Lisa exhaled.
“Duncan Rusk.”
The name meant nothing to me.
“Is he local?”
