And so I pulled out my notebook and, letter by gruelling letter, I rewrote the first paragraph of plaintext by hand, divining the words and sentences and adding punctuation.
This was the text I started with:
The first few ‘words’ of the first line showed how difficult this was going to be. They appeared like this:
1216264071AYURI01WIL00LBLDGB11EREA01DYFO0RDEC21
First, I tried spacing the letters out into vaguely recognisable words. (Knowing the user identification numbers helped a lot, but the insertion of random 0s and 1s made things really finicky.)
After ten whole minutes, I had this:
121626 4071AY URI 01WIL 00 L BLDG B11 E REA 01 DY FO 0 R DEC21
Next, I drew lines through the 0s and 1s.
121626 4071AY URI 01WIL 00 L BLDG B11 E REA 01 DY FO 0 R DEC21
Only then was I able to string the remaining letters into readable words.
I wrote them out by hand and, finally, I had this:
12/16/26
4071AY: URI, WILL BLDG BE READY FOR DEC 21?
It began with a date—December 16th, 2026—and a question to someone named Uri about whether the building would be ready for the 21st.
And there in the darkness of the Tech Detect’s sleeping closet, I risked a smile.
I was reading correspondence between the perpetrators as they planned for December 21st.
This was serious progress.
Energised, I ploughed on, painstakingly transcribing the plaintext—removing 0s and 1s, adding spaces, making it readable. It was detailed and difficult work, but I was focused, intensely focused, and when I sat up thirty minutes later, I was able to read the first three lines.
12/16/26
4071AY: URI, WILL BLDG BE READY FOR DEC 21?
4071FB: YES, GROSSMAN INFILTRATION WORKING WELL. PREPARATIONS COMPLETE FOR ACTIVITIES ON LEVELS 44, 61, 73, 95, 98, PLUS 28 AS BACKUP. BLDG WILL BE READY FOR DEC 21
4071AY: VASHA, WILL THE CEMETERY BE READY FOR DEC 21?
4071VZ: YES. GM ACQUIRED PLUS TWO ESCORTS. WILL TRANSFER TO MILL ON DEC 20
4071AY: THEN 21 DEC IT IS. STANDBY
I wasn’t smiling anymore.
Now I felt a chill.
Because now I was way behind enemy lines.
I was reading secret conversations between the kidnapper-killers as they prepared everything at the tower and the cemetery for December 21st.
I swallowed.
I had to analyse what I was reading.