I turn my head enough to see his face. His jaw is set the way it gets when he's looking at something he's still making up his mind about. “Is that a bad thing?”
"It's an observation." His mouth does the thing. The almost-smile that doesn't quite commit. "I'm good at observations."
I settle back against him and close my eyes and hold onto what I can.
Five Hole Fiction #2
Thompson
alright. mid-read check. who’s hit chapter fourteen
Kowalski
finished it last night
Berger
finished it Tuesday
Mueller
i’m on chapter sixteen
Marchetti
fifteen
Davis
same. fifteen
Hájek
i am on chapter seventeen. i could not stop
Mäkinen
fourteen
Thompson
good. so everyone’s past the briefing room scene
Davis
THE BRIEFING ROOM SCENE
Thompson
she walks in. she sees him behind the podium. and the reader just
Davis
the FLOOR drops
Kowalski
it’s a very well-constructed reveal. she has thirteen chapters of anonymous intimacy and then the professional context lands on top of it like a brick
