Page 5 of Not My Daughter


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"Look at you! You look amazing; you’re glowing." My words were muffled in her short hair.

“Mom, you've no idea how much I've missed you.” Her voice vibrated against my shoulder, a tremor of emotion bared only in these safe moments.

“Did you see the bungalow yet?” she asked.

“No, I haven’t been back there yet. I think someone took my bag there, though.”

"Let's get you settled in," she pulled back, her hands gripping mine with gentle purpose. "Wait 'til you see the bungalow. It's something else."

"Lead the way," I replied.

We navigated through the throng of guests, my daughter's presence like a beacon, guiding me with ease.

“It’s right down here.”

The path to our cabin wound through a lush maze of tropical flora, the air heavy with the perfume of blooming jasmine. Olivia's stride was sprightly, her excitement manifesting in the animated cadence of her voice.

"Everyone's been amazing, Mom," she said, a laugh threading through her words. "And the snorkeling—God, you should see the reefs!"

"Better than the pictures?" I asked, matching her pace.

"Infinitely." Her eyes sparkled.

"Sounds like paradise found," I quipped, noting the impeccable landscaping that framed our walk.

"Totally," she affirmed. A pair of tiki torches flanked the path ahead, their flames dancing against the onset of dusk.

"Olivia!" The call sliced through the warm air, and there he was: Mark—the birthday boy—emerged from around a bend, sunlight gilding his honey-blond hair. With the confident grace of a panther, he closed the distance between us.

"Mark!" Olivia's face split into a wide grin as they collided in an enthusiastic embrace.

"Look at you two, inseparable as always," I said, my heart warming at the sight.

"Can't help it," Mark responded, his smile reaching his warm brown eyes. "She's the sister I never had."

"Adopted by choice," Olivia added, nudging Mark playfully with her elbow.

"Adoption papers are in the mail," Mark joked.

"Come on, we have to show Mom the view from the bungalow," Olivia urged, linking her arm with mine.

"Prepare to be dazzled," Mark said, leading the way with a sashay that seemed to command the very ground he walked upon.

"Wouldn't dream of anything less," I replied, my attention riveted not just by the grandeur of the island but also by the intriguing dynamics at play among its guests.

Chapter4

I slippedthe keycard that Olivia handed me into the lock of my bungalow, a small click confirming my entry into luxury. We walked inside. Olivia was right. The view over the ocean was beyond spectacular.

“I’m staying in this room,” Olivia said, pointing at an open door. “Yours is over here.”

The door swung open to reveal a room that was everything I expected it to be. Polished mahogany floors reflected the soft glow of the bedside lamp, and the sheets on the king-size bed whispered promises of silken comfort. I admired the array of fresh fruit and chilled water on the marble countertop.

I immediately felt enveloped in tranquility, the only sound being the distant murmur of the sea. Even the air smelled expensive, infused with a subtle scent of jasmine that seemed to be pumped through the vents.

I barely had time to appreciate the artisan chocolates left on my pillow before Olivia's voice carried from outside my room, "Mom, you'll miss dinner if you don't hurry!"

"Coming!" I called back, slipping into sandals that were more suitable for the evening festivities.