Page 54 of The Undoing


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Low flame crawled along the back of the living room, a jagged line of orange chewing through baseboards and climbing the studs. It wasn’t wild yet. It was feeding. Deliberate. Small ignition points beginning to join, testing the air before they took it over. Every few seconds something popped—resin, wiring, trapped construction dust—each sound a countdown.

Gasoline rode the air.

I dropped automatically, staying under the smoke layer. It hadn’t banked down yet, which meant I had a narrow window before flashover conditions started building. My breaths came slow and controlled, in through the nose, out through the mouth. No panic. Panic wastes oxygen. Panic gets people killed.

“Sanaa! Call out!” I called, forcing my voice through the heavy crackle of wood catching fire.

The house answered first—a sharp, hungry series of pops rolling across the ceiling.

Then I heard it. A cough. Above me. Good. That meant this was still a rescue, not a recovery.

I moved for the staircase. Heat radiated through the railing before I even touched it, and halfway up I could see flame starting to push through the wall cavity below, thin fingers searching for air. The structure hadn’t failed yet, but it was thinking about it.

Memory tried to intrude—the last time I ran into a house like this, the collapse, the hospital, the months of pretending I hadn’t been afraid.

I shut that down the way you shut down bad data on a scene.

Not now. Stay here.

“Tariq!”

Her voice cut through everything.

I took the remaining steps two at a time, staying low. The hallway above was thick with smoke but still navigable, a dull orange glow pulsing at the far end where the fire was climbing from below.

I found her crouched near the bedroom, a wet towel pressed to her mouth, eyes locked on me. The look of trust in her eyes. The lok of knowing I would come was right there.

That hit harder than the heat.

I crossed to her and stripped the respirator off my face, ignoring the burn of the air the second the seal broke. I fitted it over her nose and mouth, tightened the straps, checked the seal with both hands the way I’d done a thousand times before.

“Breathe,” I told her. “Slow. Just like that.”

Her fingers caught my wrist once. Grounded. Present.

Behind us, the stairwell gave a violent crack. I turned just enough to see flame break through the wall fully now, climbing fast, fed by whatever had been poured down there. The exit we came from was gone.

No debate. No second guessing. You don’t negotiate with fire once it commits.

I scanned the room instead. Window. Height. Exterior grade. The hillside dropped steep—dangerous, but survivable if we controlled the landing. No ladder. No hose line. Just physics and timing.

Good enough.

I pulled her up, locked her against my side, and kept us low as we moved. The heat followed, building, the glow behind us turning brighter, louder, closer. The fire had found oxygen now. It was accelerating.

At the window I drove my elbow into the glass until it shattered outward, clearing the frame with my sleeve.

“Hold on to me,” I said.

She didn’t argue.

I swung us onto the sill, took one measured breath—last clean one I was getting—and stepped off.

The drop hit hard, but the slope turned impact into motion. We rolled instead of stopping, dirt and gravel tearing at my shoulders as I kept her tucked into my chest, counting through it, making sure she stayed protected until momentum bled out.

We came to rest halfway down the yard.

For a second neither of us moved. My lungs burned, dragging in cold air that felt like knives after the smoke. Behind us, the house roared.